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Post by aniuwolf on Jul 17, 2009 12:04:06 GMT -5
oooh! I like it. poor Coraline!
can't wait for more.
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Post by HayaMika on Jul 17, 2009 16:15:36 GMT -5
oooh! I like it. poor Coraline! can't wait for more.[/quote Thanks. |
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Post by Zakeno... yeah that idiot. :D on Jul 17, 2009 18:08:33 GMT -5
I like it too, but do you mind a minor suggestion? C:
Maybe there could be a little added to the beginning? Some dialogue by Coraline perhaps?
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Post by HayaMika on Jul 17, 2009 19:01:17 GMT -5
I like it too, but do you mind a minor suggestion? C: Maybe there could be a little added to the beginning? Some dialogue by Coraline perhaps? I'll see what I can do. I was going to have her talking A LOT in the end, but i could do it somehow. |
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Post by aniuwolf on Jul 20, 2009 1:02:09 GMT -5
so when will the next chapter be up? can't wait.
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Post by HayaMika on Jul 20, 2009 18:13:42 GMT -5
Soon. I'll start now!
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Post by aniuwolf on Jul 20, 2009 19:09:26 GMT -5
YAY!
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Post by aniuwolf on Jul 20, 2009 22:24:57 GMT -5
awwww  poor Coraline. |
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poor Coraline.